smooth out the skin tones... maybe de-saturate some color, really cool background maybe slump more, be more editorial about it. go to...*thinks*.... i think its elite.com or maybe ford.com.. but one of the websites have absolutly great poses of models that are slumping and theyre really neat. i would like to see derek have more of a inward curve and be more relaxed but have more of a vampiric look about him, i like kels pose, just soften her skin, did u use a flash?